Writing Wings For You

Marie Lukasik Wallace ~ # I LIVE Poetry – I'm passionate about life and writing and all things creative and poetic!

Breadcrumbs

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You left me breadcrumbs

to figure out your life

put together our sorrows

make sense of your strife

never knew why the door was to stay closed

and locked up so tight

you barely arose

and now you’re on the other side

We are left here wondering

filled with mystery

digging for knowledge of you

knowing no history

couldn’t you have stopped a moment to provide

a trail of crumbs on this side?

Wish there was a way to lift the veil

It seems I knock and knock,

but to no avail.

Poets inspire each other.  Sometimes it’s a poem…sometimes it’s a phrase…and sometimes it’s a word  like breadcrumbs.  Curiosity gets me to write.   Where do “breadcrumbs” lead you?   Thanks to Poetry Channel for the inspiration.

Author: writingwingsforyou

Words are powerful and hold the keys to bring healing, play and joy, making life extrordinary. Words can also shift the world into a better place. I am a writer; a storyteller and a relatioship coach; buidling better relationships from the inside out so we can have more joy, communication and love in our lives. Let's explore! Let's create! . ~ Love, Marie Lukasik Wallace

4 thoughts on “Breadcrumbs

  1. Great as a stand-alone!/Could easily be a centerpiece on your collaboration post. Obviously heartfelt and personal. Thanks for sharing, for being vulnerable.. That is authenticity in Poetry, in my opinion. Kudos!

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  2. Thank you so much!
    Your feedback is appreciated!

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  3. Reblogged this on Writing Wings For You and commented:

    I’d love to know…
    Where do Bread Crumbs lead you?

    My friend Michael left me this simple word last year, and it lead me to this poem about my Daddy…and now he reminds me again. So…tell me…

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